W2. My first edits. Describe why you made them - Yurang Wi
Edits 1: "Hanyang Univ Erica Campus"
I modified the name of campus at Hanyang Univ article. The article had used name as "Ansan Campus". However since then 2009, the campus name changed into "ERCIA Campus". So I corrected the error.
Edits 2: "Little Forest" (Movie)
I made an edit at the movie's synopsis.
Before I edited, it had described that "A story of a young woman who fails to find a teaching job and is not successful in love while living in the city, ~". However I thought love isn't the core in this movie as one of the viewers.
So I modified the part that mentioned love into "A story of a young woman who fails to find a teaching job and has been no room for composure in mind while living in the city, ~".
Edits 3: "R language" (Programming)
In Korea Wikipedia, there was only a little syntax cases to the R programming language compared to English's. So I translated the English cases into Korean, and I added own example.
I modified the name of campus at Hanyang Univ article. The article had used name as "Ansan Campus". However since then 2009, the campus name changed into "ERCIA Campus". So I corrected the error.
Edits 2: "Little Forest" (Movie)
I made an edit at the movie's synopsis.
Before I edited, it had described that "A story of a young woman who fails to find a teaching job and is not successful in love while living in the city, ~". However I thought love isn't the core in this movie as one of the viewers.
So I modified the part that mentioned love into "A story of a young woman who fails to find a teaching job and has been no room for composure in mind while living in the city, ~".
Edits 3: "R language" (Programming)
In Korea Wikipedia, there was only a little syntax cases to the R programming language compared to English's. So I translated the English cases into Korean, and I added own example.
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